Alphabet soup
- Feedback
(brief
summary.. To alter and change your chosen type (bodoni) to suit your selected
word which is humour.)
From my crit my feedback
suggested that my peers favoured
the clown lettering as they
associated this with humour most.
It was suggested for me to
possibly develop this further by
expanded on the clowns to
possible circus equipment
e.g. tents and rings. My
peers also liked my banana lettering
but would be impractical as
body copy along with clown
lettering too. It is also
difficult to interpret the original word
humour.
Constructive criticism I
received
was the letters I had blown up
looked too bold and serious
rather then suiting humour.
"Extended serifs make
the type look funny and stupid" this
along with my clumsy type
was favoured over my other designs.
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