Monday, 1 December 2014

OUGD405 Brief 1, Interim Crit

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I felt this crit was less useful then most due to the lack of
attendance of the rest of the group...

The responses to my initial designs:

"My favourite is the bees design with tessellation make the
bees bigger! I also feel the geometric designs are strong"

"You could make it more child friendly to target a young
audience"

"Explore colours"

"You could combine textures with the tessellation's in the
bee design in photoshop

" I like the honeycomb idea - it shows shape and nature I
feel you can take this idea further and explore"

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